- the way your drawings work across the book and develop in a chronological order is interesting, relevant and fun to read thogu! almost a narrative, directly informed by theory research.
- you are really utilising the spce of the journal well, your character design are great + feel well informed by information.
- Maybe add quotes?
- the journal together works really well, managing use of the space
- great concept, excited to see how it develops
Comment on the visual quality of the practical responses
- Bring in some other media
- The quality of your drawings is great . Could maybe look at adding colours or using different material ?
- I like the continuous image through ,definitely keep it up. Make sure you write about the practical in the essay.
- Really enjoy the timeline, evolution from monkey to robotdeath.
What issues need to be addressed ahead of the submission deadline?
- Finish your journal !
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